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After a good night's sleep, Shenzi opened one eye, to notice it was morning, and that she was on Scar's back. She was about to wake him up, when she had a different idea. A big, evil smile grew on her face as she went towards his neck, practically burying herself in his black mane, with only her hind legs and backside sticking out.
Trying to restrain her laughter, Shenzi grabbed her ear, and started lightly rubbing it on his neck. Not laughing got harder as she saw him flinch and heard him giggle. She put her other paw over her mouth to muffle her laughter.
After a few seconds, she heard him almost wake up, so she quickly acted like she was still sleeping. But she couldn't hold in her giggles, so she was giggling in her "sleep." Scar smirked, knowing it was her, so he decided to get back at her. So he ran his claw up and down on her side, making her burst into fits of giggles. When she opened her eyes, Scar acted like he was asleep, like Shenzi did. Shenzi smiled and walked over to his head. Then she yelled

"I know it was you!" startling him.
He smirked.

"What was me?" He asked innocently. Shenzi raised her eyebrow and smirked.

"You should know," she said. "'Cause it was you!"

"It was Zazu." Scar said, gesturing to the hornbill sleeping in his bone-cage. Shenzi looked at Zazu, then back at Scar with her evil smirk and snorted.

"Dude, it couldn't be him! He's in that cage!" She turned her smirk into a smile. "It was you, I know it! Just admit it!" Scar rolled his eyes, but was still smiling. Shenzi was so cute sometimes.

"OK, it was me," he confessed, and Shenzi smirked.

"I knew it," she said and squinted her big yellow eyes. Then she turned to walk away, but Scar laid his paw on her back and smirked, stopping her.


"But it wasn't that bad compared to THIS!" He said as he pushed her down on her back, held her down with his paw on her chest, and brushed his tail on her side.

"EEEK! HAHAHAHAHAAA!!" Shenzi laughed as she kicked her legs like crazy, desperately trying to escape. But Scar was stronger than her, so Shenzi was completely helpless. Then Scar tickled her ribs with his claws. "EEHEEHEHEHEHEEHE STAHAHAHAHAP!" Shenzi laughed as tears bubbled in her eyes and she blushed cherry-red.

"So Shenzi, was it you who disturbed me in my sleep?" Scar asked after he stopped. Shenzi darted her eyes to the left and her big pointy ears drooped to the sides of her head.

"Nooooo," She said while sweating. Scar then leaned towards her face, them being inches apart, making her even more nervous.

"You tellin' the truth, sweet cheeks??" Scar asked her teasingly, leaning closer to her, so their noses were touching. A nervous smile grew on Shenzi's face, as she nodded. While smirking, he gently placed his paw on her side, making her flinch. "You suuuure??" he teased as he started tickling her side with one claw.

"Heheheahahaha! S-s-stahahahahap!" She giggled as she tried to push him away, but she failed, and she fell on her back.

"Not 'til you tell the truth, tootsie!" Scar teased as he tickled up and down both of her sides, from her underarms to her hips.

"HAHAHAHAHAHA, PLEHEHEHEAHAHASE STAHAHAHAP! I'M NOHOHOHOT LYHYHYHYHYIHIHIHING!" Shenzi laughed as her shoulders shot up to her cheeks. Even though she wasn't tickled that much, she was near the point of screaming, because she's exTREMEly ticklish, and she was already at the point of begging. Then Scar tickled her left side with one paw, and her skinny ribs with the other, attacking the most sensitive spots. "P-PLEHEHEHEAHAHASE SCAHAHAHAR! I'M NOT LYING! I SWEHEHEHEAHAHAR! PLEASE STAHAHAHAHAHAP!" She squealed as she kicked her legs and tried to protect herself, but she wasn't strong enough to push him away. Then Scar stopped out of fake surprise.

"Uhp, uhp! You swore! Now you'll get it, Missy!" Scar taunted as he tickled her tummy with all his claws at once. "NOHOHOHOHO NOHOHO NOHOHOHOHO!! NOT THEHEHEHERE PLEHEHEAHAHAHASE!" She screamed as tears flooded out of her eyes.

"Will you tell the truth?" Scar asked over Shenzi's squeals and laughter.

"YEHEHEHES I'LL TEHEHEHELL!" Shenzi squeaked weakly, and Scar stopped torturing her. "OK, it was me who disturbed you," She confessed. "I'm sorry," she finished before cringing. But instead of tickling her again, he started gently petting her head and neck, surprising her.

"It's OK, Shenzi, I forgive you," He said as Shenzi looked at him like an innocent child with her ears beside her cheeks.

"Aww, thanks, Scar," Shenzi said as she embraced him, her face on his chest. Zazu smiled as he watched the cuddly couple. After a few seconds, Scar jumped when he suddenly heard a muffled hiccup from Shenzi's mouth, and he and Zazu snickered, as she hiccuped again.
I couldn't resist doing something like this. XD Edit: I added more stuff to it. Edit #2: At the end, Shenzi gets the hiccups. XD I think this is the best (and cutest) sneak peek for the story. X3
1st: [link]
2nd: [link]
3rd: Here

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ZantuTheLion Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student General Artist

You cracked me!! XD

 

Poor shenzi, ;)

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BrainyxBat Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. X3
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ShayuWolf Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Simply adorable, if only Scar had the capacity to be nice to OTHER people :(
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BrainyxBat Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. X3 And yeah, he does.
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ShayuWolf Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He never seems to show it to other people :(
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BrainyxBat Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. But in my "Banzai's Revenge" story, he shows it to Shenzi. X3
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ShayuWolf Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know X3 I ment it was a shame he dosn't show it to OTHER people, like NOT the hyennas
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BrainyxBat Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, yeah, it is. >.<'
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ShayuWolf Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He'd be so much happier in life.
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BrainyxBat Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. ^^
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